I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-11 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 21 Dec 2016 IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: Ready with issues This is a well written document with some minor editorial issues that need to be looked at before it is sent to the RFC Editor. Issues: From ID-nits: -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240, but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should. ======= SB> The following suggests an open issue, which needs to be SB> closed, or if closed already, the issue warning needs to be removed. Open Issues o Should we add any text regarding caching responses in Section 3? ======== 3.1. Successful State-Changing Requests representating the current state resource in the resulting 201 SB> representating - do you mean representing? ========== 3.2. Unsuccessful Conditional State-Changing Requests Frequently, clients using a state-changing method such as those listed above will make them conditional by including either an If- Match or If-None-Match [RFC7232] header field in the request. This is done to prevent the client from accidentially overwriting a SB> s/accidentially/accidentally./ ========= 9.3. URIs SB> I think that this section needs a "remove on publishing instruction" SB> since I think you have given instructions to remove all the SB> text that calls its entries.