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Document: draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/10/28
IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30


Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as Proposed 
Standard, but I do have a comment you may wish to consider.

* Sections 5.2 and 5.3

-> The document uses some non-documentation addresses (AFAIK) in some of 
the examples. e.g. 28.2.0.0/16 for an IPv4 prefix and 2600::/16 for an 
IPv6 prefix. Is it possible to rewrite these examples using reserved 
documentation addresses? Strangely enough, idnits does not seem to catch 
them either.

Thanks
Suresh