I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-roll-terminology-13.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20131014 IETF LC End Date: 20131027 IESG Telechat date: 20131024 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (BTW only editorial comments) - Title page 1: Ruting -> Routing - Abstract page 1: e.g. -> e.g., - ToC page 2 and 5 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2 page 3: commisioning -> commissioning - 2 page 4 Data Sink: move the LBR into from Field Device to here - 2 page 4 and many pages 5 and 6: e.g. -> e.g., and i.e. -> i.e., - 2 page 4: I suggest to use real units, i.e., KiB (aka kibibyte) and kbits/s (K not followed by i stands for Kelvin :-) - 2 page 5 P2MP: RFC4461]and [RFC4875] -> RFC4461] and [RFC4875] - 2 page 6: arbitratry -> arbitrary Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr