I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2014-05-24 IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-27 IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-29 Summary: Ready -------- Comment: -------- The document states that it is scoped for MPLS substrates, but I see very little in it that requires MPLS. Archtecturally, it is quite general. Was there any reason to limit the scope to MPLS? Nit --- Newly added typo: 7. Contributing Aurhors