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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.




 




Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-08-22




IETF LC End Date:   2014-08-22




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments.




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1"---->"As noted in Section 1"




-[Page 6],"but each node MUST attempt to determine a loop-free path", if the only method to detect a loop is http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6073#section-7.6, then perhaps a reference to this RFC would be useful.




-[Page 8], Section 5, typo :"consesus"---->"consensus"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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