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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-hybridmac-06




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-11-07




IETF LC End Date:  2014-11-10




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some editorial comments .




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 1], Abstract, suggestion: please spell out CAPWAP: "Control And Provisioning of Wireless Access Points (CAPWAP)"




-[Page 1], Abstract, suggestion: "However, in the split MAC mode," ----> use "Split" instead of "split" (to review the rest of draft)




-[Page 1], Abstract, remove double occurrence of "clearly": in "...not been clearly clearly defined"




Also correct:




"functions are not been clearly clearly defined"----->"functions have not been clearly defined" or "functions are not clearly defined"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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