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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-09-29




IETF LC End Date:  2014-09-29




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC .




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




Nits:




-Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language




-[Page 4] Section 2.1 ",use an access ..", it would be clearer to name the entity (AS?) who would have to "use and access token...".





-[Page 5] Section 2.2 ", use the following parameter", same comment as above.




 




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Meral




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