I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <​http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2017-07-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a few nits that should be fixed before publication. Issues: Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 4 (1) NIT: Section 5.3: s/Eventhough/Even though/ (2) NIT: Section 8: s/aTLS/a TLS/ (3) NIT: Section 8: What is the point of including the example? I don't see how it adds anything. Perhaps worked out O/A examples contrasting the differences between the new and existing cases might be marginally helpful. (But IMO not enough to bother with.) (4) NIT: Section 10.3.2: s/Througout/throughout/