I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-?? Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2018-09-12 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29 IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-27 Summary: Ready with Nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I have a few concerns about wording (e.g. things too hard to understand). I'll send a more complete message before the end of the week in the case they are not solved in version 17 I didn't read yet.