I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: this document is ready This draft describes a mechanism for reducing the number of BGP MAC advertisement routes, provide MAC address mobility, and several other MAC handling enhancements, using Ethernet Provider Backbone Bridging combined with Ethernet VPN. This work appears to provide significant improvements to both network resource usage and in MAC address manageability. Overall the document is a bit thin on material on network management, although the material describing the behavior of the mechanisms being used in the context of different kinds of failures is quite good. The document is very clearly written and the material describing protocol operation/behavior is much appreciated. The PBB-EVPN mechanism appears to be an enormous win for very large data centers. Passed the nits tool with only a warning about the publication year not matching the current year. This document was a pleasure to read. Melinda