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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-frwk-07
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2014-08-05
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-15
IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-07

Summary: Ready for publication as informational. All of the substantive comments from my last call review of version 06 have been addressed.


Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- References: 2119 language has been removed, but there's still a reference to RFC 2119.

-- 2.2, 4th paragraph: Furthermore, MEF also defines AC roles...

This draft defines the AC roles in the terminology section. It would be helpful to mention if the MEF definitions are the same as used here, either in this section or in the respective terminology section entries.

-- 5.1, 1st sentence:

The change due to one of my previous comments renders the beginning of the sentence as " "IP/MPLS L2VPN architecture has no distinction role on Attachment
   Circuit ..." Should "distinction" be "distinctive"? If not, I'm not sure how to parse the sentence.