I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17 Reviewer: Peter McCann Review Date: 2011-09-20 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2011-09-22 Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: Section 5.2: Since this notification does not refer to any particular message the Message ID and Message Type fields are set to 0. There does not appear to be a Message Type field in the PDU. Nits/editorial comments: Section 5: suggest replacing the idiom "chicken and egg situation" with "possible deadlock situation." Section 5.2: "Section 6. below." SHOULD BE "Section 6 below."