I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-02 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2019-08-14 IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with a couple of nits. The text of para 2 of section 3 refers to an initial state that is not applicable to the transition which requires this update. Emphasising continuity seems more appropriate. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Abstract, last sentence (very picky): Technically, what has been removed from the text of RFC 5377 are references to the IAOC. Suggest s/IASA/IAOC which was part of IASA/ s3, para 2, first sentence: The first sentence was applicable to the original creation of the licence policies and text when responsibility was initially transferred to the trustees and is inappropriate for the current modification of the trust organisation. It could probably be safely deleted, or the continuity could be emphasised by something like... OLD: The rough consensus described in this document reflects the agreement of the IETF as of the IETF Last Call, and the Trustees of the IETF Trust are to begin drafting license text and other materials to act on these instructions upon IESG approval of this document for RFC publication. NEW: To ensure continuuty, the starting point for license text and other materials will be that previiysly created by the Trustees of the IETF under the authority of [RFC5377] which this document supersedes. ENDS This requires a reference to RFC 5377.