I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at   Document:                         draft-ietf-hip-reload-instance-08   Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg   Review Date:                     26 September 2013   IETF LC End Date:             30 September 2013   IETF Telechat Date:         N/A   Summary:  The document is well written, and ready for publication, with some minor editorial nits that I ask the authors to consider fixing.   Major Issues: None   Minor Issues: None   Nits/editorial comments:     Abstract: ------------   Q_A_1:   I would suggest to modify “is the” to “specifies the”.     Section 1: -------------   Q_1_1:   In the abstract the text says “Host Identity Protocol-Based Overlay Networking Environment (HIP BONE)”, and in Section 1 the text says “HIP BONE (Host Identify Protocol-Based Overlay Networking Environment)”. I suggest to be consistent.     Q_1_2:   Throughout the document, you talk about “RELOAD HIP BONE”. For that reason, I suggest to expand:   “This document addresses all the previous items and provides additional details needed to built RELOAD-based HIP BONEs.”   …to:   “This document addresses all the previous items and provides additional details needed to built RELOAD-based HIP BONEs, referred to as RELOAD HIP BONEs.”       Section 3: -------------   Q_3_1:   I suggest to modify:   “The peer protocol to be used is RELOAD, which is specified in [I-D.ietf-p2psip-base].”   …to:   “The peer protocol to be used is RELOAD [I-D.ietf-p2psip-base].”       Q_3_2:   Please expand RELOAD on first occurrence (outside the abstract).     Section 4: -------------   Q_4_1:   Please expand ORCHID on first occurrence.     Section 5: -------------   Q_5_1:   I suggest to remove “defined in Section 6.5 of [I-D.ietf-p2psip-base]”, as you already state this in Section 3.