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Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-held-measurements-07.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/06/10
IESG Telechat date: 2013/06/13
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard, but I had a few minor comments as identified
in my last call review dated 2013/05/08. The authors had agreed to fix
the following issues but I have not seen an updated draft yet.
Minor
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* Section 5.2
- The Interface-Id option is the DHCPv6 equivalent of the circuit
identifier defined in RFC3046. Please add a reference to Section 22.18
of RFC3315 that describes this option.
- Is there any specific reason that the giaddr is being specified using
the IPv4-mapped IPv6 address format? From my reading giaddr is of type
bt:ipAddressType and it allows specification of both IPv4 and IPv6
addresses natively.
* Section 8.7 Page 53
I think there may be an off-by-one error here.
Shouldn't this be
so that the largest value will fit in 28 bits?
Thanks
Suresh