I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15 Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2012-06-09 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: None Minor issues: In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference. The whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere. In Section 2.3: LuriType =1 description says that the value is UTF-8. This is not correct, URIs never contain non-ASCII values. So please either say ASCII, or use IRI if you really meant UTF-8 (but use of IRIs would be horrible, so don't). LuriType=2: in network byte order? In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397). In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references. Nits/editorial comments: In Section 3, 2nd to the last para: s/deference/dereference ?