These review comments were incorrectly posted against the uloop draft, apologies for any confustion. I have been asked to perform an early review of this document on behalf of the Routing Directorate. Summary: A document on this subject is something that the WG should publish, but I think that there are number of issues that the WG need to discuss and reach consensus on before deciding whether or not they should adopt this draft as a starting point for that work. Major Issues: Before I get into the substance I am surprised that there are no IPR disclosures. In an earlier and related work (draft-francois-segment-routing-ti-lfa-00) there were three IPR disclosures. The work has four basic components, the concept of resolving the problem of P and Q being non-adjacent, the use of SR to solve the non-adjacency, the use of the post convergence path following failure and the applicability of these techniques to an SR network. The first and second points seem of utility in non-SR networks, and so I am surprised that they are not called out as such, in the first case perhaps with consideration to strategically places RSVP tunnels, or binding segments. The issue of mapping repair path to the post convergence path to the something that has always concerned me in this concept. It is true that traffic that always passes through the PLR will experience the properties the authors describe, but not all traffic will pass through the PLR post convergence. The post failure path will be topology dependent, and may take a different path from the point of ingress. I am also concerned that the authors do not discuss the need for loop free convergence, since although traffic going through the repair path will be loop-free, traffic arriving at the PLR might not be. Consider for example a topology fragment that looks like a clock with a router at each minute. Traffic enters at 9 o'clock, leave at 3 o'clock and goes via 12 o'clock and 12 o'clock fails. The routers 9..12 will re-converge at different times and this may give rise to the micro-looping of traffic trying to get to the PLR. A summary of the problem and a pointer to the companion draft may be sufficient. Finally on the basic concept it would be good to state up from whether the proposal is constrained solely to SR networks, or whether the authors believe that the concept is of wider applicability. It see no reason why it would be constrained to only work on SR networks. There is no discussion of multiple failures, nor as far as I can see of failures that are worse than anticipated. This is an important point that needs to be established early. Some methods, (MRT) intrinsically address multiple failures, others (NV) intrinsically exclude them. Simple LFA needs a supervisor to quickly abandon all hope when they occur. In an SR network the paths used are not the shortest paths, they are a collection of shortest paths, so there needs to be some discussion on the interaction between the SR paths and repair paths to consider whether it is unconditionally safe against forwarding loops. It would presumably be so if the authors borrowed the concept of repair addresses rather than normal forwarding addresses from not-via, but I don't think they have done this. There should also be some discussion on the original path constraints that are applicable to the repair. Presumably the ingress node constrained the traffic to go though failed node F for a reason. If the repair is unconstrained that reason could be violated, but this is not discussed in the text. In the Security section you say: The behavior described in this document is internal functionality to a router that result in the ability to guarantee an upper bound on the time taken to restore traffic flow upon the failure of a directly connected link or node. As such no additional security risk is introduced by using the mechanisms proposed in this document. SB> I am not sure that the above is correct. There may be a security reason SB> why a packet was steered along a path which breaks when you use this SB> technique. In the conclusion you say: The mechanism is able to calculate the backup path irrespective of the topology as long as the topology is sufficiently redundant. SB> That is certainly true in classic. I am not sure this is universally SB> true under SR which includes the use of non-shortest path and SB> binding segments. Minor issues: For each destination in the network, TI-LFA prepares a data-plane switch-over to be activated upon detection of the failure of a link used to reach the destination. SB> To make the scaling clearer to the reader, I think you need SB> to make it clear that for each protected link, you determine SB> the repair needed to reach every destination reachable over that SB> link. You sort of say that, but it's a bit hidden. We provide the TI-LFA approach that achieves guaranteed coverage against link, node, and local SRLG failure, in any IGP network, relying on the flexibility of SR. SB> Should that be any SINGLE link.... failure? In the text (and the text that follows) To do so, S applies a "NEXT" operation on Adj(S-F) and then two consecutive "PUSH" operations: first it pushes a node segment for F, and then it pushes a protection list allowing to reach F while bypassing S-F. You need to reference the SR operations. Also you are considering Adj segments, and presumably they were there for a reason, but you do not discuss that. In 5.3.1 and 5.3.2 you have a list of conditions, but do not make it clear whether any or all must be true. Nits 1. Introduction Segment Routing aims at supporting services with tight SLA guarantees [1]. This document provides a local repair mechanism relying on SR-capable of restoring end-to-end connectivity in the case of a sudden failure of a network component. SB> Grammar needs a little work in the last sentence. In Fig 1, I assume that the blobs are network fragments. In the conclusion you say: This document proposes a mechanism that is able to pre-calculate a backup path for every primary path so as to be able to protect against the failure of a directly connected link or node. SB> you need to add SRLG