as Experimental. Substantive comments and statements of supp= ort for advancing this document should be directed to the mailing list. Editorial suggestions can be sent to the authors. This last call will end on August 9, 2013.

as Experimental. Substantive comments and statements of support<= /pre>

for advancing this document should be directed to the mailing list.
Editorial suggestions can be sent to the authors.  This last call=
 will
end on August 9, 2013.
Regards,
Behcet

Thanks, Luis, for addressing all my concerns.

Best Regards,

Akbar

From:= = LUIS MIGUEL CONTRERAS MURILLO [mailto:lmcm@tid.es]
Sent: = Tuesday, July 23, 2013 2:58 PM
To: Rahman, Akbar; = multimob@ietf.org
Cc: Ignacio Soto Campos (isoto@it.uc3m.es); = cjbc@it.uc3m.es
Subject: RE: [multimob] = draft-ietf-multimob-handover-optimization-03

<= /div>

Hi Akbar,

Thank you very much for you review. Please, see our comments = in-line.

Best regards,

Luis

De: multimob-bounces@ietf.org = [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.or= g] En nombre de Rahman, Akbar
Enviado el: lunes, 22 = de julio de 2013 7:35
Para: multimob@ietf.org
Asunto:= Re: [multimob] = draft-ietf-multimob-handover-optimization-03

<= /div>

Hi,

I reviewed the I-D and have the following feedback to the = Authors:

=B7     &nb= sp;   Overall, a very well-written and complete document. I support = it progressing on the Experimental track.

=B7     &nb= sp;   However, I did have the following editorial points for the authors to = consider:

o   The following spelling mistakes should be = corrected:
=A7= In section 4.1.2 and 6.1, “octects” should be changed to = “octets”
=A7= In section 8, “tosecure” should be changed to “to = secure”
[Luis>>] Thanks for pointing it out. We will fix that in the = next version.

o   Should you define “SIAL” in the Terminology (section 2) = and also use it in the main body of the I-D? I noted that = currently you only used the term in the Title and the Appendix so an = alternate comment is whether you really needed to use this term at = all?
[Luis>>] We believe it is useful to maintain the SIAL acronym = for quick reference to the solution. Next version will spread the usage = of the term across the text.

o   Should re-write first sentence of Section 7. The sentence is = too long and hard to parse.
[Luis>>] to be fixed in the next = version

=B7     &nb= sp;   Finally, I had one technical question. I did not really = understand what you were trying to imply by your first requirement in = section 1.1? The requirement talks about being “applicable = to any kind of MN”.   I don’t recall this type of = requirement in the other Multimob related I-Ds. What is the = significance of specifying this requirement?
[Luis>>] the idea is that the solution must support standard IP = nodes, without requiring any particular functionality (such as for = example L2-trigger capabilities).

Best Regards,

Akbar

From:= = multimob-bounces@ietf.org = [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.or= g] On Behalf Of Behcet Sarikaya
Sent: Monday, July = 15, 2013 12:34 PM
To: multimob@ietf.org
Subject: [multimob] = draft-ietf-multimob-handover-optimization-03
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Folks,

This message = starts a four week
Multimob Working Group last = call
on advancing:
Title = : PMIPv6 multicast handover optimization by the Subscription = Information Acquisition through the LMA (SIAL)
= Author(s) : Luis M. Contreras = = Carlos J. Bernardos = Ignacio Soto = Filename : = draft-ietf-multimob-handover-optimization-03.txt = Pages : 37 = Date : = 2013-07-08

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The slides a= re due latest by tomorrow morning, please send your slides to the chairs.
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Regards,

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